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Monday 26 August 2019

Stanley shovel!!!

Hello, today I'll be telling you all about my Stanley shovel. It is a very cool shovel because I created it and it's for them but Coles so if you think it's cool please leave that comment down below and yeah that's what I've got to show you all tell you all about my Stanley creation cos it's got a lot of cool stuff it's it's green it's really cool and he's going to be blue by







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4 comments:

  1. Angela Taylor26 August 2019 at 16:26

    Hi Connor,

    Thanks for posting your Holes work about your shovel. This would be a good blog post if you had mentioned about why this is an important item in this story. Remember your readers want to know why you chose to create a shovel? How did this relate to the story? They don't just want how cool you think the colours are. I look forward to seeing your edited post that explains your learning.

    Mrs Taylor

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    1. Anonymous16 October 2019 at 13:39

      I think you Miss Taylor for that comment I will try my best next time I want to do something like that thanks for the comment
      bye
      from connor.

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  2. Anonymous28 August 2019 at 17:50

    that does not look like a shove

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    1. Anonymous16 October 2019 at 13:34

      Hi sebastian i tried my bist

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