Tuesday 18 September 2018
My First Post EVER!
Hi my name is Connor and i like motorcross and i live in christchurch and i lave playing fortnite and i am ter 90 on fotnite and my fins aru hasan and lewis qumin
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Hi connor is Hunter from Rimu
ReplyDeleteI love fortnite and motocross too.
Next time I think you should check your spelling before you post your blog post. I see that there is capital litres but no foll stops.
You have done a good job.
Hi, it's Isaac from yms I'm hoping that you are going to learn a lot more about blogging and also having your own personal blog I hope that you're going to have fun blogging all around the world as you can block from St Bernadette's to every school really if they've got a class blog and individual blocks I hope it works sometimes will realise that you can a blood pressure want to kind of include some photos but I did it cause it was your first ever post and look my first post was never actually good as well I was hoping that you might be able to get a bit more enthusiastic with your blog and maybe next time just have a few pictures and bold and what you like doing As the saying your auntie and 19 fortnight buy from Isaac and Rima class
ReplyDeletei love your writing connor and i like how you like playing fortnite and your tir 90 in the battle on fortnite. i like how you like motorbiking. next time you coud tall me how is your favrot friend out of me hasan and quinn.
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ReplyDeletekia ora connor it's me Nikoli from Rimu class.
ReplyDeleteI love your writing connor and I like how you like playing fortnite and your tier 90 in the battle on fortnite. I like how you like motorbiking. next time you could tell me how is your favorite friend out of me hasan and quinn. What do you play on pc or console?
Hi Connor,it's Mikael I think that is is good that you have capital letter at the start. But next time I think that you should write more and work on your punctuation.
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