Hi, it's Hunter I like the fact that you have written maybe next time you could write a little bit more facts and some more colour and photos to brighten it up a little bit.
hi connor brayden here I like the way you have done lesson one because I am on lesson two did you know that the capital city of canada is ottawa to improve you could add a bit more detail kindregards brayden
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maybe next time you could write a little bit more facts and some more colour and photos to brighten it up a little bit.
hi connor brayden here I like the way you have done lesson one because I am on lesson two did you know that the capital city of canada is ottawa
ReplyDeleteto improve you could add a bit more detail kindregards brayden